tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post7398507179659459970..comments2024-03-09T06:15:04.254-05:00Comments on Rach Writes...: Never-ending Scene Blogfest (or cliffhanger---whatever) October 25-26Rachael Harriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16764930101064527321noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-58523667680252930272010-10-28T10:14:14.816-04:002010-10-28T10:14:14.816-04:00Hey Rach,
Congrats on the honorable mention! So h...Hey Rach,<br /><br />Congrats on the honorable mention! So happy for you!<br /><br />MichaelMichael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-65771532629872171522010-10-27T10:19:15.428-04:002010-10-27T10:19:15.428-04:00Congrats on being a semi-finalist!
And a very wo...Congrats on being a semi-finalist! <br /><br />And a very worthy piece you've let us read, there! *runs off to read first page* <br /><br />Tessa.xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-60770923418017489162010-10-27T09:59:56.454-04:002010-10-27T09:59:56.454-04:00Hey Rach,
Congratulations on being chosen a semi-...Hey Rach,<br /><br />Congratulations on being chosen a semi-finalist!<br /><br />Good luck!<br /><br />MichaelMichael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-7637000936514884412010-10-26T22:19:41.744-04:002010-10-26T22:19:41.744-04:00LOVE the twist! Draven sound creepy hehe. Great ...LOVE the twist! Draven sound creepy hehe. Great job :)JJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12710025691586074051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-49465569239004262612010-10-26T19:15:47.900-04:002010-10-26T19:15:47.900-04:00Hi guys, just wanted to say a HUGE thanks to you a...Hi guys, just wanted to say a HUGE thanks to you all for reading my cliffhanger entry and making such great comments. Your feedback means so much to me :)<br /><br />I loved taking part in this blogfest, can't wait for the next one!<br /><br />RachRachael Harriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16764930101064527321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-70720983962865684562010-10-26T16:11:20.165-04:002010-10-26T16:11:20.165-04:00Very interesting. this scene kept my attention and...Very interesting. this scene kept my attention and really made me want to turn the page. She ha d a crush on him! Yipes!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-61069471916093689942010-10-26T14:31:27.305-04:002010-10-26T14:31:27.305-04:00That last line really hooked me and surprised me. ...That last line really hooked me and surprised me. Definitely a great hook there. Great post.<br /><b><a href="http://nitewriter6.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Edge of Your Seat Romance</a></b>Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-27281053367735967572010-10-26T10:32:47.855-04:002010-10-26T10:32:47.855-04:00Wow, this certainly propels the reader forward. Th...Wow, this certainly propels the reader forward. The dark setting, the loss of memory, the mystery of the boy with two names...Mary Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06729559222307081988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-47416716349616471822010-10-26T06:28:45.743-04:002010-10-26T06:28:45.743-04:00Ugh. She knew him and loved him and he looks like...Ugh. She knew him and loved him and he looks like a serial killer. I want to read more, but I'm scared to. Great cliffhanger.Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-38289002607744829202010-10-25T23:51:12.853-04:002010-10-25T23:51:12.853-04:00Thanks for participating! We've judged your en...Thanks for participating! We've judged your entry. o/\o *high five*Brenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-69029516242531238722010-10-25T23:42:47.109-04:002010-10-25T23:42:47.109-04:00You have a great ease in your writing. I flew thro...You have a great ease in your writing. I flew through it. Wonderful tension. More, more, more ...<br /><br />Great cliffhanger.<br /><br />Michael D.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-59801218353070781182010-10-25T22:03:22.218-04:002010-10-25T22:03:22.218-04:00Ooh, nice job, Rach! Definitely made me want to t...Ooh, nice job, Rach! Definitely made me want to turn the page.<br /><br />I'm a bit tardy getting back to you, sorry. A little family crisis (relative got sick, is okay now!). I really loved working those words into my story but don't think I can participate full time. Got this project editing my ms and have got to discipline myself. *groans* But, thanks, Rach, you're a sweetie.Kittie Howardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07756250649095903317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-11002723421012049202010-10-25T21:24:53.959-04:002010-10-25T21:24:53.959-04:00The last statement was indeed a stinger. Why do th...The last statement was indeed a stinger. Why do the girls all love the bad boys?Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-78913565633547980842010-10-25T21:18:24.354-04:002010-10-25T21:18:24.354-04:00I'd read more. Great job!I'd read more. Great job!E. Arroyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-48708451033182919432010-10-25T20:42:36.601-04:002010-10-25T20:42:36.601-04:00"I’d been in love with him for the last five ..."I’d been in love with him for the last five years." - what a way to end it!!! I love this. Very intriguing!Jennie Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02088195986628533511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-72283561829880347232010-10-25T18:50:06.830-04:002010-10-25T18:50:06.830-04:00Great job. I'm left wondering what happened an...Great job. I'm left wondering what happened and who the boys are?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07995267172282765794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-38335833776493113452010-10-25T18:47:29.470-04:002010-10-25T18:47:29.470-04:00Great cliffhanger. I would love to read more!Great cliffhanger. I would love to read more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-44936970924458738842010-10-25T18:39:56.113-04:002010-10-25T18:39:56.113-04:00I am interested to read more. There are a few ques...I am interested to read more. There are a few questions this section does raise and it makes the reader want to find out. Nice work. I was a little surprised at the jump after the character already failed at moving, but once past that I had to keep reading.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-37645786289077501092010-10-25T18:07:09.277-04:002010-10-25T18:07:09.277-04:00Hi,
Yeah, that Draken has a lot to answer for. No...Hi,<br /><br />Yeah, that Draken has a lot to answer for. Not teribly nice in the last snippet I read, but this really does bring his evil side to life. Great descriptions here, good build up to the cliffhanger, too. Slick piece of writing! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-21471905322197306162010-10-25T17:03:13.203-04:002010-10-25T17:03:13.203-04:00Ooh, interesting. You've left a lot of little ...Ooh, interesting. You've left a lot of little hints that make me want to read on. I wish you wrote what tortures were going on (psychological, physical, etc). I want to know what the stakes are! Great job. Love this.J E Fritzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03372746219262163566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-41247831973580792822010-10-25T16:53:49.448-04:002010-10-25T16:53:49.448-04:00Well written. Great cliffhanger.Well written. Great cliffhanger.Wendy Tyler Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10841984342368861282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-3092410946721515622010-10-25T15:36:39.713-04:002010-10-25T15:36:39.713-04:00Definitely a great cliffhanger! Great job.Definitely a great cliffhanger! Great job.Julie Hedlundhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04477115458570906449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-81767803978254646512010-10-25T15:13:04.377-04:002010-10-25T15:13:04.377-04:00Very curious as to what's happened before and ...Very curious as to what's happened before and what will happen next. Great job and very chilling.<br /><br />Thanks for the read.<br /><br />JJodi Henryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03216373059861459896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-38254952975661506832010-10-25T15:11:31.420-04:002010-10-25T15:11:31.420-04:00Great twist at the end! Thanks for sharing!Great twist at the end! Thanks for sharing!Jennifer Hoffinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616744694563644199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3380793708805406109.post-84296685410922763152010-10-25T14:17:03.626-04:002010-10-25T14:17:03.626-04:00Good description and a great little twist at the e...Good description and a great little twist at the end. Nice job!Nikkihttp://neyska.posterous.com/noreply@blogger.com